Ineffective Argument in Jessica Statskys Essay, Children need to Play,

Jessica Statsky, in her essay, Children need to Play, Not Compete attempts to refute the common belief that organize sports are inviolable for children. She sees organized sports not as healthy pass-times for children, but as onerous tasks that children do not truly enjoy. She also notes that not only are organized sports not enjoyable for children, they may cause irreparable harm to the children, both emotionally and physically. In her thesis statement, Statsky states, When overzealous parents and coaches impose adult standards on childrens sports, the run can be activities that are neither satisfying nor beneficial to children (627). While this statement is strong, her defense of it is weak.One of the assumptions Statsky makes is that, One readily understandable danger of likewise competitive sports is that they entice children into physical actions that are defective for growing bodies (627). This statement rests on the assumption that children would not perform any phy sical actions that are bad for growing bodies (Statsky 627) without organized competitive sports. This is simply untrue. Children jump from swings, climb trees, skateboard, pop wheelies and otherwise put themselves in physical peril with alarming regularity. Childrens unloosen and unorganized play often results in broken bones and stitches, even for the most timid children.Statsky also makes another faulty assumption, which is that competition is an adult imposition on the world of childrens play. She says in her article, The primary goal of a professional athlete winning is not appropriate for children (629). Children compete to win in the same way that adults do, and they do so on their own without any adult pressure. Common playground gam... ...petitive sports can cause lasting harm and nurture no benefits for these children (Statsky 627), then examples of how childhood competition negatively affected individuals years after the fact would go a long way to proving her accusation. As Statskys thesis rests on the assumption that adult imposition of competition and organization in childrens sports makes the games neither satisfactory nor beneficial to the children, then lack of benefit must be shown along with lack of satisfaction. The existence of unsatisfied child athletes in organized sports is no indication that children are somehow unsuited to competition and team sports. whole kit CitedStatsky, Jessica. Children Need to Play, Not Compete. Reading Critically Writing Well A Reader and Guide. Ed. Rise B. Axelrod, Charles R. Cooper, and Allison M. Warriner. 7th ed. Boston Bedford, 2005. 627-631.